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 == Story ==
-Smokey stumbled into the piratecraft world inside a cargo crate bound for Admin Island. She had been ordered by a powerful man from the ''Secretary Shipping Company'' to take care of his paperwork. However, en-route her crate came lose and drifted across the ocean.
+Smokey stumbled into the piratecraft world inside a cargo crate bound for Admin Island. She had been ordered by a powerful man from the ''Secretary Shipping Company'' to take care of his paperwork. However, en-route her crate came loose and drifted across the ocean.
-She washed up on some sandy beach and freed herself. She came across some local farmers arguing and bickering about their disputed land. She tried to offer her assistance, but the farmers would hear non of it, continued to shout over her, and argue about their aching backs, hurting butts, and all manner of things.
+She washed up on a sandy beach and freed herself. She came across some local farmers arguing and bickering about their disputed land. She tried to offer her assistance, but the farmers would hear non of it, continued to shout over her, and argue about their aching backs, hurting butts, and all manner of things.
 Keeping a clear mind, and remembering her training, she did the only natural thing and murdered them, to rid the world of such horrors, and as a clear message to others who followed suit. She coined the term 'butthurt' to describe the bickering that had taken place.