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-Hello People Friend and everyone....i don't really know what to put here.<br />
+Hello people friends and everyone....I don't really know what to put here.<br />
-I am Stingbarry a german Minecraftplayer and mostly peaceful i guess.As lately i have developed a favor towards farming and wildkeeping in minecraft....oh and brewing with the brewery-plugin.<br />
+I am Stingbarry a german Minecraft player and mostly peaceful, I guess. I have recently developed a joy towards farming and wildkeeping in Minecraft... oh and brewing with the brewery plugin.<br />
-I guess i will put some kinda guestbook below and as soon as i find out if and how i have to set it so others can write their opinion bout me i will do that.
+I guess I will put some kind of guestbook below and as soon as I find out if and how I have to set it so others can write their opinion about me, I will do that.
 == Guestbook/Stingevaluation ==
-'''Just write about me waht you like.'''<br />
+'''Just write what you want about me.'''<br />
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-"I guess i am a nice and uncomplicated player who likes to help....and i am neutral..."-''Stingbarry''
+"I guess I am a nice and uncomplicated player who likes to help... and I am neutral..."-''Stingbarry''