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 It is placed on the plains island of Nanjana and is a village for farmers and fishermen.<br />
-It has been founded in the early spring of 2015 and is therefore still pretty young.
+It was founded in the early spring of 2015 and is therefore still pretty young.
-Even though it is close to the Cove there aren't many settlers in Carmory or on Nanjana.<br />
+Even though it is close to [[the Cove]] there aren't many settlers in Carmory or on Nanjana.<br />
-Additionally one should mention that Carmory has always been a neutral village, having some connections to the [[British Empire]] and to the [[Elven Empire|Elven]] but never joining one bigger faction.
+It's also worth mentioning that Carmory has always been a neutral village, having some connections to the [[British Empire]] and to the [[Elven Empire|Elven]] but never joining one bigger faction.
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 ==Important Buildings==
 '''Stingbarry's Inn'''<br />
-This Inn belongs to the townfounder and only brewer of Carmory. It contains 3 guest rooms as well as a central room for tavern guests where they can consume what they have bought.<br />
+This Inn belongs to the town's founder and only brewer of Carmory. It contains three guest rooms as well as a central room for tavern guests where they can consume what they have bought.<br />
-Close to it are the stables of the inn where the cattle and the horses of the inn are held.<br />
+The stables of the inn are close by, where the cattle and the horses of the inn are held.<br />
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-'''Nanurta's Shrine'''
+'''Nanurta's Shrine'''<br />
 This shrine is at the other site of the island and is a place of belief for the few followers of Nanurta a godess of nature and fertility.<br />
 Additionally, all flowers of the world - her holy flowers - grow inside the shrine.<br />
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 '''The Train Station'''<br />
-This train station is connected to a rather short railway route.It is mostly used to transport persons or items from one end of the island to the other.
+This train station is connected to a rather short railway route.It is mostly used to transport people or items from one end of the island to the other.